A simple checklist for improving a story's readability.
2 party sluts, 10 guys, 1 bedroom.
Boss and pregnant Latina secretary attend a conference.
Andy has good time with friend's wife.
Julia has strange encounter with man in bar.
Avril Lavigne gets some time alone with The Legend.
She gets caught up in her lust for a friend.
Lesson in lust Ashton will never forget.
She has the flat to herself & intends to use it.
Husband takes some time with wife before dinner.
Two lovers reunite with an explosion of passion.